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[6968] Artist: Tree | Title: No Title | Time: 13 min


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Tree @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 6:46 AM

i shouldn't let this fucking bother me lmao what a douche i am

sorry about this incredibly emo sso-esque picture

SoRo @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 9:11 AM

do a shout it out @w@
no but srs i am sorry!! i hope the situation gets better

Tree @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 12:05 PM

lmfao soro I AM SO DARK AN EVUL NO WUN UNDERSTANDS ME that is essentially a shout it out
although this look like one i'm sorry /wrist
ty babby <3

Moo @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 1:51 PM

yeah I went on sso the other day and saw them doing shout it outs again????

I THOUGHT THAT FAD DIED OUT WHATS GOING ON
but ghfjds I actually kinda wanted to do it for some reason??? But not the mormal, "oh baw my life is an endless black abyss" sorta things just like.. little tidbits about me or something?
LIKE "OH HI I LIKE FROGS" or some shit idk

..... and yes I actually really really do like frogs this is sort of a recent discovery for me hurrrr
BUT HEY TREEFAEC
FEEL BETTER BBY ILU AS MUCH AS MOMRAD LIKES TO BE ANGRY AND THAT'S A LOT BECAUSE MOMRAD IS KIND OF A BITCH
-TACKLEHUGSANDSPARKLESDESU- ;3; <3


[6967] Artist: SoRo | Title: MY MY MY SHARONA | Time: 52 min


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SoRo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 7:37 PM

i got bored of this i have 0 attention span
no name wanted to get stabby
name pls???????
she is a girl but if you thought boy it's ok because she is supposed to be butch lol

SoRo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 7:43 PM

http://www.barachan.com/poekaki/pictures/1472.png normally looks like dis btw ignore how terrible both of these pictures look what am i doing

SoRo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 7:45 PM

kawaii fox chan gurl

Moo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 7:53 PM

whaaaaat I like how intense this is!!

and for some reason all I can think is Cassidy or something. Like Cass idk gmggndg

SoRo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 8:08 PM

butch cassidy
i am so punny

Tree @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 6:32 AM

BAMF

Tree @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 6:32 AM

that should be her name


[6965] Artist: Moo | Title: No Title | Time: 4 min


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Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:18 PM

DERP ONE MORE BEFORE I GO

STICKMAN CHASING MY TOWN'S LOCAL JESUS WAGON

WHICH IS LIKE AN RV COVERED IN SHIT LIKE WHAT I WROTE ON THERE

I need to actually get some decent pics of it god damn

welp now that I don't have a computer for the rest of the night I might as well play alan wake

or go on the wii and check back here idk 8D;;

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:23 PM

lol maybe I should show you guys my weird as hell stick figure comics sometime

they're the result of schooltime boredom so you know they're weird as shit
plus it's my sense of humor so ghfjks

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:32 PM

it'd be pretty awesome if oekaki worked on the wii.. AT LEAST I CAN STILL COMMENT though playing video games sounds much more fun right now.. IDKKKK

SoRo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:34 PM

JDFKDSF that sounds beautiful

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:38 PM

IT ISSSSS I was at an intersection and saw it waiting at a red red on the other side and seriously if you were there you probably would've been creeped out because I was all alone in my car yelling, "OH MY GOD. IT'S JESUS WAGON OH MY GOSH"

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:39 PM

red red is slang for red light yo

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:40 PM

.... and it's also the name of my brother's blankie. Yes, he named it red red.

I named mine yellow though so um..

edit: ugh sitting here and doing nothing is making me feel even more like poop so Imma attempt sketchbook doodles..

SoRo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:59 PM

DSFHKJDSFLSDFLKDFS i probably would've yelled the same thing..
i never named my blankie.....
because i had like 343894783....

SoRo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 12:01 AM

let me keep abusing ellipses

(Edited by Moo)
NEVEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRrrr

Moo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 12:01 AM

I... I kinda want my blankie now..

I HAVEN'T SEEN HER IN SO LONGGG yes she has a gender
I'd go ask mom where she is but it's late lolol

Moo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 12:04 AM

I'LL HAFTA MAKE DO WITH CHICKIE, MY FAVORITE STUFFED ANIMAL SINCE I WAS A BABY~~~~

also chickie is one letter away from being my boyfriend's name and I think it's cute!!

Tree @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 6:21 AM

GOD BOTHERERS ARE SO ANNOYING i mean if there is a god i bet he's just like argh leave me alone at least once in a while

SoRo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 7:41 PM

why...did...you...do...that...to...my...post...

Moo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 9:27 PM

do what i dunno what you're talking about...

SoRo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 9:37 PM

...cry...

Moo @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 1:52 PM

don't cry little one


let me comfort u in the safety of my big white van
filled with candy


[6964] Artist: Moo | Title: No Title | Time: 35 min


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Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:11 PM

brother will be home any minute so he might want his laptop back.. so this may or may not continue idk ghjfdks

though good news! I'm getting a new one before school starts apparently. laptop I mean.
sweet

SoRo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:22 PM

do you mean opossum's patoot

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:23 PM

exactly

Tree @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 6:13 AM

fgjlgd the stickmen oh my god i love your little doodles they are so cute


[6963] Artist: Moo | Title: No Title | Time: 26 min


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Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 10:26 PM

emotions make me wanna punch myself in the face sometimes :/

might go back and doodle a bit more idk

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 10:33 PM

blurred out fail arm anatomy and made it look like there was a really bright light

i m art mastr

Detective Wolf @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 10:35 PM

THAT ARM LOOKED FINE
STOP FEELING USELESS YOURE AN AMAZING PERSON OKAY

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 10:38 PM

hgjdfkhggfghfd thank you dw ilu ;3; <3

I GET SAD EASILY AND I'M REALLY BORED AND DON'T FEEL LIKE DOING MUCH SO I MIGHT SPAM WOA???
I'll delete it all if there's too muchhh |D;;

SoRo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 10:41 PM

pls spam us i rabu your arts

Tree @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 6:18 AM

HEATHER YOU ARE AN AMAZING PERSON AND YOU ARE AMAZING AND I LOVE YOU BECAUSE YOU ARE AMAZING
like rly i consider you one of my ~*INTERNET BFFS*~ because you are so great and friendly and ALWAYS THERE FOR OTHER PEOPLE
YOU'RE LIKE KINDER THAN MOST PEOPLE I KNOW IRL i don't think i've ever seen you be mean to anyone YOU ALWAYS HANDLE THINGS IN SUCH A GREAT WAY!!! AND I LOVE YOU
don't feel useless seriously YOU BRING JOY AN HAPPINESS TO PEOPLE!!! not only that but I KNOW YOU'RE GOING TO GO FAR WITH YOUR ART IT IS SO GORGEOUS
I AM ALWAYS ENVIOUS OF YOUR DRAWINGS EVERY SINGLE TIME EVEN IF IT'S JUST A DOODLE I'M LIKE I WISH I COULD DO THAT ;_____;
ok caps lock time is over but YOU SHOULDN'T FEEL USELESS NOT ONLY ARE YOU A GREAT PERSON BUT YOU ARE GORGEOUS
i know i sounds like /such/ a creeper saying that
IDK WHAT ELSE TO SAY??? but ily like a fat kid loves cake!!! I LOVE YOU MORE THAN CHUCKIE!!!! THAT'S PROBABLY NOT TRUE!!!
don't feel useless u are a great person babby

Moo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 11:41 AM

ggyhdjdjfugthfhfhfhridjdjrjfhdbgfhv treeeeeee ;u; <3


[6962] Artist: SoRo | Title: No Title | Time: 42 min


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SoRo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 9:58 PM

even i am surprised at how terrible my anger has become
too bad i don't care enough to get help
enjoy a pouty brigette surrounded by my cat, dog and a bear

SoRo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 10:04 PM

she's pouting b/c she has man hands

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:34 PM

your art is so great ok fffgfhdhd

I DON"T SEE MANHANDS I see the soft, gentle hands of a delicate young flower

SoRo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 12:13 AM

~*~*~*~*~~*~~*~*~*~*~

Moo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 12:19 AM

but yeah NO MAN HANDS

also the animals are cute ;u;

Seidal @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 12:53 AM

I <3 how this is put together. and.. I don't know, I think more men are starting to have feminine hands, especially if they don't do hard labor.. lol

Tree @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 6:20 AM

i hear ya man i get angry so easily this is gorgeous tho!! i love how you colour

Mara @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 4:34 PM

lol I'm probably not angry enough
things usually pass through me, but if I do get mad it's usually when stuff keeps happening then I go neutral -> annoyed -> mad


[6961] Artist: Moo | Title: No Title | Time: unknown


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Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 5:01 PM

GHDFJSK I'M DYING SO BAD AT THESE????

this site hgfjds http://www.yahooanswerfail.com/

AND THESE ARE MY FAVORITES SO FAR


http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/bunny.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/9yo.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/interesting.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/prom.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/dogdealer.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/breakup.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/her-pleasure.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/dog.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/pouch.png

(Uploaded by Moo)

SoRo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 5:08 PM

DFKJLFDSLKFSDSDFLKDSF i love y!a
so beautiful

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 5:14 PM

THESE TOO GHDFKSGFD
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/name.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/pancake.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/jely.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/mother.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/shopping.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/easier.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/birdface.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/experiment.png
http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/03/youtube.png

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 5:15 PM

these are the most amazing thing shjgdfs

and the intimate fml entry things are funny to me too omg hgjfkds I need to look through some of those again too

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 5:19 PM

this http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2010/06/pizza.png

ACTUALLY THIS ONE SCARES ME because I live on the east coast

..I guess it's a good thing I never liked dominos pizza anywaylolol

CowboyAstronaut @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 5:56 PM

Oh ... oh my god lol dying from some of these. And some of them are just... wow, awkward/no comment.

Also asldkfjlskd that pizza guy is disgusting. I live in the east, luckily not on the coast with this crazy-gross fella doing that to the poor defenseless pizzas! :T

Mara @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 9:30 PM

oh god i actually heard a prank like the jacking off on pizza but it was someone keeping a spray bottle of pee and it would just blend in with the grease so nasty
these are so great though gdjlk

Mara @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 10:38 PM

http://yanswerfail.files.wordpress.com/2009/11/pregobaby.jpg lol
and that actually reminds me one time this girl in my class was like "oh could you get pregnant from masturbating?" and everyone was like.. what??? no???
she was pretty dumb lol

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 10:53 PM

mara ghjfsdg that is the best seriously

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:50 PM

lol in 8th grade reading class, this chick told the teacher that she planned on murdering someone because it was apparently their fault a friend of hers had died.

reason I bring this up is because she seriously thought you could get pregnant (or get an std) from sitting on a toilet.. hur

Seidal @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 12:48 AM

LOL wow are they serious?
Ooh.. the murderous 8th grader one kinda creeped me out tho.. O__O;;

Mara @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 1:13 AM

gfdjl oh geeze
at the murder and std thing
yeah people are idiots xD

Voodoo @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 7:10 PM

have you seen the yahooanswers tumblr? it's hilarious lmao and it has a lot of them
http://theyahooanswers.tumblr.com/

(Edited on July 28, 2010, 7:12 pm)

Moo @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 1:53 PM

voodoo where



where did you come from get back here ;o;


[6957] Artist: tigerchic643 | Title: No Title | Time: 47 min


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tigerchic643 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 8:18 PM

i wanted to finish this on here.


critiz?? or redline please?
(Uploaded by tigerchic643)

(Edited on July 26, 2010, 8:42 pm)

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 8:53 PM

ummm the only problem I really see is that the back legs are bending outward WAYY too much, they should look more like they're coming towards you, you know?
the one on our right looks okay because of the curve in the body, but you still might wanna fix it up a bit~ c:

oh oh and the front paw that's being stretched out.. the paw can't bend that way, so just like.. turn it around? idk I'm so bad at critique I'm sorry ghfjdsgl

Mara @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 12:09 AM

Yeah I think he would probably have the paw pointing out under him. And with the tail it looks a little bit low, but I would probably give a distinction as to where it starts, cause the tailbone is basically a continuation of the spine. I'd put maybe a curved line near the end of the tuft's left side.
But yeah it's looking good so far :D can't wait to see it done

Tree @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 4:05 AM

i fail at animal anatomy so i agree w/ what others have said! plus his left ear is a lot bigger than his right... but idk if that's intentional...

i still think this is badass


[6956] Artist: Mara | Title: No Title | Time: 43 min


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Mara @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 7:32 PM

I'm bored so I draw insanely fat ponies

SoRo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 7:44 PM

makes me want to play harvest moon

Detective Wolf @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 7:54 PM

omg yes soro totally stole my comment
erggh so cute

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 8:09 PM

damn it you two I thought the same thing

Mara @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 11:36 PM

ghdjk now you guys are gonna making me want play it
I still need to buy it though ;ww;

Tree @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 3:19 AM

i don't want to play harvest moon (c-c-c-combo breaker) but THIS IS SO FUCKING CUTE RRHH IT'S LITTLE HOOVES AAAAAHHH

(Edited by Moo)
i.. I didn't edit this what're you... what're you talking about???

Tree @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 4:12 PM

AAAUUUGH MOO GET OUT OF MY HEEEAADDDDDD

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but i like your head, its warm and cozy and has a great view!!!!

Seidal @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 12:49 AM

noooooooooooooooo harvest moon is so addicting! XD
lol @ Tree & Moo


[6953] Artist: Tree | Title: No Title | Time: 25 min


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Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 2:59 PM

nvm, pen pressure's working again now.
wallace from scott pilgrim

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 3:32 PM

hjfkdgs TREE I LOVE YOUR STYLE SO MUCHHH

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 3:34 PM

TY MOO!!!!!!
woah i was jus looking at all the old archives here and THE AMOUNT OF COMMENTS WOW
WE HAD WAY MORE MEMBERS
that's it i'm going on a member hunt
starting with voodoo
she runs kyoukatsu now rite

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 4:09 PM

ghfjdsgf yeah <xD

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 4:12 PM

oh god tree


that one archive of mine

I hate it so much why have I not deleted it yet what the hell I'm about to unarchive it or something ewwwww

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 4:20 PM

OKAY THAT'S IT IT'S GONE I CAN'T GHDFJS TAKE IT ANYMORE HGFKJDS it's so hideous tree

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 4:24 PM

no I am going to kepe the comments

RETOUCHING TIME HURRRR

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 4:25 PM

wait the halloween one??
ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS I LOVE THAT!!!!! the tones and...... idk I LOVE IT YOU POOP

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 4:26 PM

WHAT NO HGDFJGS NO I HATE IT SO MUCH IT'S SO


SO UGLY TO ME NOW
MY OLD STYLE WAS LIKE
MONKEY BALLS
COVERED IN POOP

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 5:06 PM

I LOL'D AT MONKEY BALLS COVERED IN POOP BUT I STILL LOVE IT!!!!!! even if you hate it

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 5:09 PM

tree weazie won't let me log out hgjfds???

SoRo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 5:18 PM

punishing you for destroying your picture

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 5:21 PM

because it wants you to stay
forever @________@

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 5:26 PM

dammit


DAMN IT I should have never ruined it

..but I don't wanna leave weazie ever so u_______u!!!


[6951] Artist: tigerchic643 | Title: No Title | Time: 45 min


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tigerchic643 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 11:51 AM

so i guess im in. =D so heres a cute happy little puppy!

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 12:06 PM

Awwwwhhh how adorable! <3
I love the curly tail and those big floppy ears ;u;

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 12:23 PM

i love those paws! so widdle and cute

tigerchic643 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 12:35 PM

hehehe ty =3

CowboyAstronaut @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 1:36 PM

Welcome to Ze family, yo! :'D

LOVE the fuzziness of this fella! <3 And how curly its tail is d'awww!


[6944] Artist: CowboyAstronaut | Title: No Title | Time: 56 min


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CowboyAstronaut @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 9:18 PM

I'm... not so sure I know what Snotty looked like, but anyways.. nothing special, just a doodle~

Took a little break from my relentless refsheet-making to make this, Moo. I know he's still with you in spirit, and I'm sure he appreciated you being such a great mum for him while he was in your care. <3

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 1:04 AM

UFGGUFUFIFIFODOGJGHGDUDJXHDHGFGGFFUYGUFIG ;;;;;;U;;;;;;

oh god thank you so much
you have no idea how much this means to me ;; <33333333

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 1:10 AM

God seriously.. thank you so much ;;
Like.. even without their real mom, they seemed to be very happy and comfortable while they were with me, and I'm so very happy I could give them that for even just a few days ;; <33333

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 1:12 AM

also, yeah, that's pretty much exactly what they both looked like gfhf <33

no I don't believe I know what an edit button is.. !!

Mara @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 2:11 AM

Aw this is so sweet ;o;
and you have such a cool style~

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 4:05 AM

awww manda this is so very sweet of you ;o; your art I'd brilliant, as always!

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 5:14 AM

stupid iphone decides 'is' should be 'I'd'

CowboyAstronaut @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 1:35 PM

D'awww Moo, I'm so glad you like it! <333 I know how upsetting it is to lose a little one like that. Dogs are amazing creatures, it's ridiculous how deep they can dig themselves into your heart~ <3

And thank you Mara and Treeeee, I really appreciate it! :'D <333
(ugh wth kudos for even replying to stuff on a phone I can barely text without messing stuff up lmao!)

Moo @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 3:19 PM

oh gosh this looks 10x better on the computer screen ;u; and it was already great to begin withhhhh <3333

lol the the colors always look different when I'm on the wii <xD


[6943] Artist: tigerchic643 | Title: tryout | Time: 223 min


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tigerchic643 @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 7:15 PM

DONE!!! CRITZ PWEASE!!

(Edited on July 21, 2010, 10:40 pm)

Moo @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 1:40 AM

Ohh very nice! I'll crit only a little bit right now because I'm DEAD tired and can barely think straight hurrrr

but all I can notice right now is that the subject seems rather out of place.. Like the background is a bunch of blue tones and all, so the dog's colors should have more of a blueish hue to it

..and yeah puppies are crying and I gotta feed them againnn so Imma cut this short |D;;
I'll give you more feedback the next time I can, kay? c:

Moo @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 2:18 PM

ALRIGHT now that I have a little more time I'll go into some more critique hfkjd

UMM like I said, the dog should look a lot more blue, kind of like this http://yfrog.com/fv186kp
sorry it's sorta messy I used a touchpad for it hgdfkjs

aaaand the anatomy looks okay to me? Just the pose is sorta awkward lookin. I did a redline, I hope it helps? http://yfrog.com/5g186ojp

also the back paw looks too big to me.. and the muzzle/nose is sorta crooked lookin, but I tried to fix that in my redline~
I really like the background! I like the buildings, but I think you could've made them a tad neater looking.. besides that I don't think there's anything else to be concerned about.. OH OH one more thing hurrrr since it's supposed to be dark outside, the shading should be a lot darker to reflect that~
Now I just need to see your deviantart gallery and I'll make my vote c:

Alrighty~ I say in c: now we just need a few more voters.. if this doesn't get any feedback I'll bump it up to the top of the page for you~ Good luck <3

SoRo @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 2:55 PM

to add to what moo said, the dog really stands out because the background is lineless and the dog isn't, and it makes the dog look more like a sticker put into the background.. but i'm very happy you made the grass go over the feet because people tend not to?? idk where i'm going with this i am terrible at writing critiques oops <u>
i say in as well

Paisley @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 3:12 PM

More or less the same crit from me! However I do love your shading on both the subject and the background--just together they both look out of place. 0:
I say in!

Tree @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 3:48 PM

apart from the background the anatomy seems really off. i can't... explain it. i'm not good with words. but i can't draw a redline right now, so i'll do my best.
the back leg nearest to us looks ok, but i'm not sure if a dog's leg can bend that much. the paw is huge and... blahh idk. the other leg seems too far back; it kinda looks like he needs to pee. the angle at which he's standing is about 30 degrees facing us, so his back end should be at an angle as well, meaning the back leg furthest from us should be further forward so it looks like he's turned to us more.
his back seems too round to me. i feel like it should have a dip in it, because it seems as though he doesn't have a spine or a neck, and he's just a big balloon. but that might just be me...
the shoulder nearest to us is too low and small, and that makes the leg seem like it shouldn't be in that pose. the only thing i'm gonna say about the other leg is the paw - the dew claw looks too big and is sticking out too much. http://www.bijoupoodles.com/images/Dewclaw.jpg it should be more around that size, and seem as though it's sticking to the leg.
i think you did an alright job on the face, but like it said, his body and eyes make him seem as though he is facing 30 degrees towards us, but his snout seems to tell a different story. we should be able to see more of the nose and mouth.

that's all i'm gonna say; i'll redline if i get a chance. good luck!

Tree @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 3:56 PM

oh and sorry but i'm going to have to say out. i hate to be the bad guy but i just don't think you're quite up to the standards, and your first tryout seems really rushed. i think you'd be able to make it with some practise though.

tigerchic643 @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 1:09 PM

so i have 3 ins and 1 out. should i wait for a couple more votes?

Tree @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 5:07 PM

i guess so. that's the problem with this oekaki, we're not active enough dskgjlf

Moo @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 7:15 PM

I'll bump this so it gets a bit more attention~

Tree @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 7:19 PM

up to the top it goes wheeeeee

CowboyAstronaut @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 8:14 PM

Oooh, I really like this!

The blue shades you added into the coloring on the canine really help tie it to the background so much better. Perhaps the lineart could have been a more muted grey/blueish tone instead of black, the subject still seems to pop quite a bit. The paw style seems cartoonier than the face, with its small eyes, and the background could perhaps have been a bit more refined - maybe lineart on the background would have helped. I love its pose, like it is slinking off, and its expression is lovely - so solemn~ And your shading is really great, as is the lineart - I love, love, LOVE the fur scruffs around its neck, face and chest. Idk they're just really cute haha. x'D

All in all, I really like your work, so I'mma say get IN here! :'D

(Edited on July 25, 2010, 8:16 pm)

Detective Wolf @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 11:27 PM

i looked through your gallery on da and i think youre to about our standards
i say in

tigerchic643 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 11:06 AM

ty =]

Kunaike @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 11:42 AM

late again ahhhhhhhdfjk
but yes I think everyone covered everything!
lovin the color scheme in this~ <3
and looks like hes running away aww ;m;

I SAY INNNN

Mara @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 6:46 PM

I vote in too (:
I think there's enough votes to count you as part of the team!
Congrats :D


[6942] Artist: Tree | Title: No Title | Time: 9 min


ShiPainter

Tree @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 5:27 PM

envy

Moo @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 4:00 PM

tree I love your spam <3

Tree @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 4:31 PM

moo i love you <3

Detective Wolf @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 6:30 PM

aaaa my computer is finally fast enough for me to comment and tell you to keep spamming okay i love it all!!

Tree @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 6:52 PM

baww ty dw bby but i think you guys should draw!!

Detective Wolf @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 6:54 PM

my tablet's dead bawww
or else i totally would

Tree @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 6:58 PM

nooo that sucks D:

CowboyAstronaut @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 8:17 PM

Just gonna say I love all dese Tree scribbles up in here too! <3

Ugh I want to draw here soon I've just been working on getting a bunch of stupid character refs up and finished! :T

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 6:33 AM

tankyou manda! x

Tree @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 7:58 AM

why did i put an x??? i must be in facebook mode


[6941] Artist: Tree | Title: scott pilgrim's finest hour is brilliant | Time: 9 min


ShiPainter

Tree @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 5:18 PM

kim from scott pilgrim
oops i forgot to draw clothes on her lmfao kim you slut



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